In writing we are writing about the boy and the dragon the boy was cooking with dragons fire. the boy was using pitch fork so he can be safe of the fire and he can cook.
The boy is cooking the food with dragons fire.
The boy is using dragons fire to toast the marshmallow.
The boy wants to eat the marshmallow.
The boy was using the pitch fork so he can be safe.
The boy is hungry and he want to eat marshmallow.
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hi its me aleshia l like how you but in the boy is hungry and he want to eat marshmallows. its very cool but you need to make its a little small becaues we can't see a little bet of the words
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